My Holiday
Drenna
It was a quiet day, until I finally decided to take my TV upstairs, well I wish it was mine but my brother Darren just has to ruin everything and make us share the TV. The TV was our old TV it used to be in the living room, until we decided to upgrade it and get a smart TV. Mum and Darren used their muscles to bring the television to my room - I do have muscles but I didn't want to show off to everyone (you know what I mean). As soon as the TV got into my room , Darren and I began to change everything around, my bed, tables, clothes on the floor and one of my drawers. An hour later we finished tidying up, we turned on the TV and spent the whole day in my room and watched YouTube videos and listened to music.
Nice story, but could you be more descriptive?
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