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The Beast

Ash-lee, Ava and Drenna

Humming gently above the water, the motor was groaning,  two blades were slicing the water making the water foamy and a dark brown. The boat was gliding above the water going 250 mph.  Beads of sweat were forming on our foreheads from the thick hot air entering our lungs and back out our noses and mouths.  I ruffled my hair and looked at the deep dark depths below, a shadow went past, a big long black figure, I staggered backwards and screamed to my crew ‘’TURN THE MOTOR ON!!’’ The shadowy figure was rising and bubbles were steaming from under the dark murky water. I shot a quick glimpse of the beast that my crew had lured in, It had spikes down its back and pimply skin, the beast's jaws were open wide and looked as sharp as fresh razor blades that could pierce your skin with a tiny amount of pressure, the gnashes from the beast were the only white in all of the brownness, It’s tail was trailing behind it thrashing sideways and making more bubbles rise, I was engulfed in this beasts majestic ways and all its details, The beast had picked up speed and was coming towards the bubbling surface, again I screamed “ QUICK TURN ON THE MOTOR, IT’S GOING TO COME UP TO THE SURFACE!!’’ at this point we were chewing off our fingernails hoping we will survive.

Frightened we carried on riding along the smooth water making small waves. BANG! Our boat stops, we try switching it on but it doesn’t  work. We look around nothing but water. We stand there looking around for something to come, suddenly the boat moves like something  smashed into it. Sounds of splashing , our hearts pumping blood around our body at lightning speed. We move very slowly to look over the edge.

The Beast turned around and glided through the water with ease, turning around it slowly prepared itself to launch out of the water, it disappeared, we took one last look over the ed….

‘’Hello, Good morning I am Cecilia Ash well today we are reporting 3 missing people, the last time their sighting was when they were going for their annual fishing competition and that was the last time they were seen, someone reported an empty boat floating, with a wild crocodile lazing on it, we captured a photo it was such a cool moment, the crocodile had a big belly and some investigators think she’s pregnant, so we let her go back into her habitat, anyways back to the story if you have any details please contact the police immediately, I’m Cecilia Ash well and you're watching One News.



Shared Story Blurb 



It’s the fishing competition. There’s a lurking beast under the water and no one knows, mysterious events lead up to something terrifying that happens to the three unfortunate men who have no clue what’s going on. Shadows gliding through the water, stalking the boat, and trying to devour them whole, will the beast catch up to them? Or will it not? Read to find out…
In this gripping story you will find out things you never knew before. If I were you I would be scared to ever go in a lake again, we warned you..













Science 

This is the science we have been learning with Mrs Green's , we have been working with mentholated spirits in a glass bottle with some rope coming out at the top, she then lights the rope at the top and sets it on fire, we put a sheet of steel above it and had the flame coming through it,   then placed a plastic can over the top and boiled it till it steamed and bubbled we then placed it into iced water and it sucked all the air out creating a vacuum. It was really cool to watch.






Parts Of Speech Poem

Adjective-Dutch

Noun-Dog

Verb-Dances

Adverb-Dumbly







The Weird Goofy Swimmer

The shiny sun shines on to the water, Beautiful fish swimming and a weird goofy swimmer.
She slips on her goggles, Plans where she’s going to swim. Run’s and drives into the water. The water was clear it was warm and filled with sea creatures. She sees flying fish jumping out of the water and does a little dance, like a little girl that just landed her first kart wheel and ready to follow her dreams as a dancer. As she was swimming she felt a little gas coming, But she don’t worry about that too much. she worried about the starfish that was green, and it was most likely sick.


100 World Story

I was in my room, reading my book called The Big Mystery, It was about this boy who goes on these adventures and he doesn't know where he's going, some places are good and some places are scary and spooky. It was nice and quiet, until i heard dad's voice screaming from downstairs. I went to have a look and SUDDENLY!! Nothing happened yet. I got closer and closer and he was yelling at my brother. I heard dad saying something about the lawer. Then SUDDENLY!!!! Dad punched the wall!!. It must've been something really bad, That i didn't want to get involved, and i went back to my room and stayed quite.


Angry Amy

NO!! MUM I DON’T WANNA WEAR THISHoney this is the only thing I could find” replied mum. Amy got so angry she had big black bags under her eyes, she was grabbing and pulling her hair as she was yelling and screaming at her mum. Then she finally had enough and STOMPED all the way to her room and SLAMMED the door with a big bright red face.

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MUM!!!

Mum SLAMMED open the door as she come back from work. She CHUCKED  her messy hand bag on the floor, her eyes were CLENCHED as she was STOMPING up the stairs.  Her red clenched arms were on her hips as she was walking around the room huffing with a red face.


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Drenna


It was a quiet day, until I finally decided to take my TV upstairs, well I wish it was mine but my brother Darren just has to ruin everything and make us share the TV. The TV was our old TV it used to be in the living room, until we decided to upgrade it and get a smart TV. Mum and Darren used their muscles to bring the television to my room - I do have muscles but I didn't want to show off to everyone (you know what I mean).  As soon as the TV got into my room , Darren and I began to change everything around, my bed, tables, clothes on the floor and one of my drawers. An hour later we finished tidying up, we turned on the TV and spent the whole day in my room and watched YouTube videos and listened to music.


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